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帮忙看一下这篇英语作文Dearclassmates,I'mLiMing.Afterthediscussionwefoundthat70%ofthestudentsthinkdoingexerciseeverydayisagoodidea.Butweshouldn'tdoitforalongtime.Theythinkdoingexercisecanmakeourrxlaxe
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Dearclassmates,

I'mLiMing.Afterthediscussionwefoundthat70%ofthestudentsthinkdoingexerciseeverydayisagoodidea.Butweshouldn'tdoitforalongtime.Theythinkdoingexercisecanmakeourrxlaxed.Sowecanstudybetter.Andit'sgoodforourhealth.Ifweexeciseforanhoureveryday,we'llhaveahappinesslife.

But30%ofthestudentsdon'tthinkso.Becausetheythinkexercisingwillmakeourexcited.It'sbadforstudentstostudy.Anddoingexercisewillwastetime.Itcanalsomakepeoplefeeltired.Evenwewillgetinguredwhenwearedoingexercise.

看看有没有什么错误?

可是第一句话是题目中给的,不能改呀。。。

庞永杰回答:
  Dearclassmates,   I'mLiMing.Afterthediscussionwefoundthat70%ofthestudents   thinkdoingexerciseeverydayisagoodidea.Butweshouldn'tdoit   thought这里时态应该是有问题,不改也无大碍   foralongtime.Theythinkdoingexercisecanmakeourrxlaxed.So   too读一下上下文usrelaxedAnd   wecanstudybetter.Andit'sgoodforourhealth.Ifweexecisefor   And—What'smore,   anhoureveryday,we'llhaveahappinesslife.   happyhappiness是名词   But30%ofthestudentsdon'tthinkso.Becausetheythink   exercisingwillmakeourexcited.It'sbadforstudentstostudy.And   us   doingexercisewillwastetime.Itcanalsomakepeoplefeel   tired.Evenwewillgetinguredwhenwearedoingexercise.   Sometimes吧Even很怪will—may不是一定会受伤的   onthediscussion没必要   一楼那个sothat用的漂亮
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