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帮忙看一下这篇英语作文Dearclassmates,I'mLiMing.Afterthediscussionwefoundthat70%ofthestudentsthinkdoingexerciseeverydayisagoodidea.Butweshouldn'tdoitforalongtime.Theythinkdoingexercisecanmakeourrxlaxe
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帮忙看一下这篇英语作文
Dearclassmates,
I'mLiMing.Afterthediscussionwefoundthat70%ofthestudentsthinkdoingexerciseeverydayisagoodidea.Butweshouldn'tdoitforalongtime.Theythinkdoingexercisecanmakeourrxlaxed.Sowecanstudybetter.Andit'sgoodforourhealth.Ifweexeciseforanhoureveryday,we'llhaveahappinesslife.
But30%ofthestudentsdon'tthinkso.Becausetheythinkexercisingwillmakeourexcited.It'sbadforstudentstostudy.Anddoingexercisewillwastetime.Itcanalsomakepeoplefeeltired.Evenwewillgetinguredwhenwearedoingexercise.
看看有没有什么错误?
可是第一句话是题目中给的,不能改呀。。。
庞永杰回答:
Dearclassmates,
I'mLiMing.Afterthediscussionwefoundthat70%ofthestudents
thinkdoingexerciseeverydayisagoodidea.Butweshouldn'tdoit
thought这里时态应该是有问题,不改也无大碍
foralongtime.Theythinkdoingexercisecanmakeourrxlaxed.So
too读一下上下文usrelaxedAnd
wecanstudybetter.Andit'sgoodforourhealth.Ifweexecisefor
And—What'smore,
anhoureveryday,we'llhaveahappinesslife.
happyhappiness是名词
But30%ofthestudentsdon'tthinkso.Becausetheythink
exercisingwillmakeourexcited.It'sbadforstudentstostudy.And
us
doingexercisewillwastetime.Itcanalsomakepeoplefeel
tired.Evenwewillgetinguredwhenwearedoingexercise.
Sometimes吧Even很怪will—may不是一定会受伤的
onthediscussion没必要
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