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我的作文能拿几分啊2011专四作文PrivatecarownersshouldbetaxedforpollutionWithmoreandmoreprivatecarsswarmingintoourlives,weseemtohavelessfreshairandmorerisksofgettingadisease.Somemaintianthatweshouldcontrol
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我的作文能拿几分啊

2011专四作文

Privatecarownersshouldbetaxedforpollution

Withmoreandmoreprivatecarsswarmingintoourlives,weseemtohavelessfreshairandmorerisksofgettingadisease.Somemaintianthatweshouldcontrolthenumberofcars,butIdonotagreewiththem,Isticktotheideathatprivatecarownersshouldbetaxedfortheirpollution.Myideastemsfromthreeaspectsasfollows.

Firstly,anydiscussionaboutthisproblemwouldinevitablyinvolvesmoney.Somethinkthatitwillbeanotherexpensetoourlives,butitcanreallyrefrainusfromusingcarsfrequently.Secondly,althoughcontrolthenumberofcarsenjoysadistinctadvantage,weareinamodernsociety,controllingthenumberofcarswillbringinconvinencetous.Thirdly,Idonotdenythattaxingtheprivatecarownerswillbringinconvinencetous,butitcanbringfreshairtous,wecantakeabustowork,And'keepfreshair'shouldbethesloganbearinourminds.

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  文章写得挺好的.条理清晰,语句通顺.
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