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请哪位老师帮忙改改英语作文,指出错误指出,DearHenry,I’mgladtoreceiveyouletter.It’sapleasureformmetotellyoumyplanofthiscomingsummervacationafterthecollegeentranceexamination.Firstofall,agoodrestisnee
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请哪位老师帮忙改改英语作文,指出错误指出,
DearHenry,
I’mgladtoreceiveyouletter.It’sapleasureformmetotellyoumyplanofthiscomingsummervacationafterthecollegeentranceexamination.Firstofall,agoodrestisneededbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse,I’lldomorereadingforfunandforknowledgeaswell.I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.They’vedonesomuchforme,youknow.Ifpossible,I’lltakepartinsomesocialarteritissothatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.
Bestwishes!
LiHua.
郭占军回答：
改在括号里DearHenry,I’mgladtoreceive【you】（your）letter.It’sapleasure【for】metotellyoumyplanofthiscomingsummervacationafterthecollegeentranceexamination.Firstofall,...
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