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作文求改（语法）ItwasaSaturdayafternoon,Dianeworeareddree,shewaswaitingforJoeinaFrenchrestaurant.Fewminutesafter,Joearrived.Dinewashappytomeethim;however,Joeseemedimpatient.Hesimplyaskedherquestionsandalways
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作文求改（语法）
ItwasaSaturdayafternoon,Dianeworeareddree,shewaswaitingforJoeinaFrenchrestaurant.Fewminutesafter,Joearrived.Dinewashappytomeethim;however,Joeseemedimpatient.Hesimplyaskedherquestionsandalwayslookedoutsidebywindow.Dianecontinuedtospeakwithhimandafterwards,Joebecameinsupportable.HelookedatDianeseriouslyandsaid:"IalreadyhaveagirlfriendwhonamesTerry.IsentinaformtoFind-a-Love（交友公司）becauseoneofmybestfriendaskedmetoaccompany."Dianewassurprised,shefeltalittlecomfortless,butshewasverypleasedforherfriend.(Diane和Terry是好朋友,Diane为好友来试探）
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ItwasaSaturdayafternoon.DianewaswaitingforJoeinaFrenchrestaurantandsheworeareddree.Fewminuteslater,Joearrived.Dinewashappytomeethim;however,Joeseemedimpatient.Hesimplyaskedherquestionsandalwayslookedoutsidethewindow.Dianecontinuedtospeaktohimandthen,Joebecameinsupportable.HelookedatDianeseriouslyandsaid:"IalreadyhaveagirlfriendwhonamedTerry.IsentaformtoFind-a-Love（交友公司）becauseoneofmybestfriendaskedmetoaccompany."Dianewassurprised,shefeltalittlecomfortless,butshewasverypleasedforherfriend.
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