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批改作文,这篇文章根据英文写作的要求来说,有哪些需要改进?Admittedly,thecompetitionsinthecampusarefierceenough,whichhasrenderedthestudentstremendouspressure.Buttheyshouldalsobeawareofthefactthattheyhast
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批改作文,这篇文章根据英文写作的要求来说,有哪些需要改进?
Admittedly,thecompetitionsinthecampusarefierceenough,whichhasrenderedthestudentstremendouspressure.Buttheyshouldalsobeawareofthefactthattheyhastofacemorecut-throat/intensecompetitionsafterleavingtheuniversityoneday.Withoutsuchexperiencesinuniversity,thestudentswillfeelmoredifficulttointegrateintosociety.What'smore,asamatteroffact,competitionsexistobjectivelyeverywhere,anditisthroughcompetitionthatstudentscanbeadmittedtothebestuniversitytoaccepthighereducation.
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1.Admittedly,thecompetitionsinthecampusarefierceenough,whichhaverenderedthestudents
2.Buttheyshouldalsobeawareofthefactthattheyhavetofacemore...
3.Withoutsuchexperiencesinuniversity,thestudentswillfeelitmoredifficulttointegrateintosociety.
4.Asamatteroffact,competitionsexistobjectivelyeverywhere
5.anditisthroughcompetitionthatstudentscanbeadmittedtothebestuniversitytoreceivehighereducation.
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