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【改错WhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcanwhenIwasinhighschool.mostofmyfriendhadbicyclesihopedicouldalsohaveitonedayisawasecondhandbicycle,thatwasonlyonehundredyuan.iaskmyfatherth】
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改错WhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcan
whenIwasinhighschool.mostofmyfriendhadbicyclesihopedicouldalsohaveitonedayisawasecondhandbicycle,thatwasonlyonehundredyuan.iaskmyfatherthemoneybuthesaidheonlygivemehalfofthemoneyheshouldfindtheotherharfmyselfsoiwenttosellnewspaperaftertheschool.myfatherwaspleasedifishowedhimthemoneyamonthafterhegivesmetheotherfifty,youcanimagienhoumuchhappyiwaswhenirodetoschoolonmyuwnbicycle
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whenIwasinhighschool.mostofmy【friends】hadbicyclesihopedicouldalsohave【one】onedayisawasecondhandbicycle,【which】wasonlyonehundredyuan.i【asked】myfather【forsome】money,buthesaidheonly【gave】mehalfofthemoney,【I】shouldfindtheotherharfmyself,soiwenttosell【newspapers】after【去掉the】school.Myfatherwaspleased【when】ishowedhimthemoneyamonth【later】he【gave】me【fiftyYuan】,youcan【imagine】【how】[去掉much]happyiwaswhenirodetoschoolonmy【new】bicycle
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