问题标题：
【这段英语有无错误,求批改.english如下：ThewritergavealifttoayoungmaninthesouthofFrancelastyear.TheygreeteachotherinFrench.ThewritercanspeakafewwordsofFrench.theysatinsilence.theyoungmansaidwhatyou】
问题描述：
这段英语有无错误,求批改.english
如下：
ThewritergavealifttoayoungmaninthesouthofFrancelastyear.TheygreeteachotherinFrench.ThewritercanspeakafewwordsofFrench.theysatinsilence.theyoungmansaidwhatyouspeakEnglishattheendofthejourney.hewasEnglishhimself.
刘瑞兰回答：
前面写的还好,就是逻辑上似乎有点不通顺.
ThewritergavealifttoayoungmaninthesouthofFrancelastyear.TheygreetedeachotherinFrench.ThewritercanspeakafewwordsofFrench,buttheysatinsilence.
最后一句改成：
Atlast,theyoungmanaskedwhetherhecanspeakEnglishattheendofjourney,becausehewasEnglishhimself.
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