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英文作文评改~最好给个分数（15分）GreatingaGreenCampus1.建设绿色校园十分重要,2绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境.,3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该.正文：Thecampusiswhereweliveandstudy.Onlyinagoode
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英文作文评改~最好给个分数（15分）GreatingaGreenCampus1.建设绿色校园十分重要,2绿色校园不
仅是指绿色的环境.,3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该.
正文：Thecampusiswhereweliveandstudy.Onlyinagoodenvironmentcanwestudyandlivebetter.SocreatingaGreenCampusisveryimportant.
GreenCampusisn'tonlymeanagreenenvironment,butalsoarichlearningatmosphereandaquietlivingenvironment.
iWeneedsuchaenvironmenttolive,soweneedtomakeefforttocreatit.First,weneedtocherishtheenvironment.Trynottodroplittercarelessly.Second,weneedtobefriendlyandwarm.Third,wecan'tshoutorchasecausally.Forth,weneedtomakegooduseoftheresourseofourschool.Lastbutnotleast,weneedtodosomeexerciseafterourclasstomakeusenergeticandhealthy.Agoodenvironmentisthebeginningofsuccess,soletmakeourefforttocreatit.
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dontstartwithasentencewith'so'greencampusDOESNTonlymean...notneedforacomma(,)before'but'deletethe'i'before'we'add'in'after'live'(weneedsuchANenvironmenttoliveINso...)...
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