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两篇英语稿,求帮忙修改啊、、在线等参加比赛用的,找不到老师了、、字数超了,只贴一篇,另一篇重新提问MyPersonalStatementHello,everyone,I'mFiona,asilentgirlwhowascomesfromabeautifultown,
问题描述:

两篇英语稿,求帮忙修改啊、、在线等

参加比赛用的,找不到老师了、、

字数超了,只贴一篇,另一篇重新提问

MyPersonalStatement

Hello,everyone,I'mFiona,asilentgirlwhowascomesfromabeautifultown,issixteenyearsold.Ilovecomputerverymuch,andtobeagreathackerismydream.Hackerisagroupofpeoplewhowerewellversedincomputer,andtheyaregoodatmathandEnglish,themostimportantistheyobeytheHackerSpirit,it’stheonlydifferencebetweenhackerandcracker.

Iknowtobeagreathackerisdifficult,soIwillworkhardforit.ThefirststepIwilldoisstudyhard,especiallyinmathandEnglish;thenIwilllearntheknowledgeaboutcomputertechnologyfrommyfathertoimprovemyselfinmysparetime.That’sme,agirlwhohasadream,what’saboutyours?

这个需要再加一两句话,我词穷了….不知道怎么加

邵晓芳回答:
  稿呢?
秋菊回答:
  正在输入中,对不起哈
邵晓芳回答:
  Hello,everybody.IamFiona,aquietgirlwhocomefromabeautifultowninthenorthofChina.Iam16yearsold.Ilovecomputerverymuchandmydreamistobeagreathacker.Hackersareagroupofpeoplewhoaregoodatcomputer.TheyarealsogoodatmathandEnglish.ThemostimportantthingisthattheyobeytheHackerSpirit.That'sthemaindifferencebetweenahackerandacracker.Iknowitisnotaneasythingtobeagreathacker.SoIwillworkhardforit.ThefirststepIwilltakeistostudyhard,especiallymathandEnglsih.ThenIwilllearntheknowledgeaboutcomputertechnologyfrommyfatherinmysparetimeinordertoimprovemyself.That'sme,agirlwhohasadream.Howaboutyou?Doyouhaveanydreamswhichyou'dliketosharewithus?Thankyouforlistening.
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