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一段英文,几句话,有空请帮我看看哪里需要改改-Firstly,asupplierwhichoffersrawmaterialsorgoodswithbetterqualityisconsiderable.-Itwillindirectlyaffectsthecompany’simageandsalesasthefinishedproductsorservice
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一段英文,几句话,有空请帮我看看哪里需要改改

-Firstly,asupplierwhichoffersrawmaterialsorgoodswithbetterqualityisconsiderable.

-Itwillindirectlyaffectsthecompany’simageandsalesasthefinishedproductsorservicearebasedonthem.

-Secondly,lessimportantcostsisalsoanirreplaceableelement.

-Notonlyabouttheproductcosts,butalsoincludetransportationcosts,andsometimescustomsduties.

-Thatmeansasupplierwhichprovidesthemostreasonablepriceandlocatednearestthecompanyislikelytobetheidealone

-Thisisadirectwaytoincreasetheprofit.

-Thelastbutnottheleast,adequatesupplyisalwaysrequired.

-Avoidsupplierswhichinacountrythathavepoliticalinstabilityortradebarrierstothetargetproducts.

-Becauseifthesupplyiscutoff,thecompanywouldforcedtobediscontinued.Andthelossescausedbyitwouldbeyondcompute.

-Allinall,the3factorsmentionedabovearethekeystodecidewhichsupplierisforthecompany.

史习智回答:
  supplier我公司用Vendor.offers改为offered.建议把firstlysecondly改为1、2、调理更明确些
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