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谁能帮我改一下英语作文(高中)?OurNewProduct-PancakeOurfactorymakeanewfood-Pancakenow.Itmakesbyrice、maize、grease、creamandsoon.Andwemakemanydifferentkindsofit.Andweusetheespeciallywaystomakeit,justlik
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谁能帮我改一下英语作文(高中)?

OurNewProduct-Pancake

Ourfactorymakeanewfood-Pancakenow.Itmakesbyrice、maize、grease、creamandsoon.Andwemakemanydifferentkindsofit.Andweusetheespeciallywaystomakeit,justlikefringorbaking.So,ourpancakeisverydelicious.Wewilltastethegoodsmellinlongtimeswhenweeatit.Andtheimportantisthatweaddmanynutrientmaterials.Itisgoodforoldoryoungpeople.So,manypeoplealllikeeatingit.Theediblemethodsisthatisopenthatisfood,orregardasasnack.Pleasebuyitandtasteit,youwillfellgoodofit!

最好能给一下得分(满分25)谢谢……

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  是做广告吗?也许你应该把作文题发上来的.算了,我来写写看吧:Youknowwhat?Ourfactoryhaddevelopedanewproduct!It'spancakewhichismadefromrice,maize,grease,creamandsoon.Andtherearereallyman...
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