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StrawberryGeneration

Asweallknow,strawberriesaredelicious,butfragile.Theskinofstrawberrycanbruiseeasily.So,therecomesaChineselanguageneologism--strawberrygeneration,referringtopeoplewhosharethesamequalitywithstrawberries.

StrawberrygenerationwasfirstlycreatedbyaTaiwanwriterinoneofhisbooksaboutofficerules.Itusedtorefertothepost-60sgenerationofofficeworkerswholivedinaprotectedandcomfortableenvironment,andgotdentedeasily.

Gradually,thetermiswidelyacceptedbyallthepeopleinmainlandChina.Although,itisinitiallyusedforTaiwanesepeople,nowadays,ithasalsobeenwidelyusedtorefertopeoplewhoaregenerallywelleducatedbutareself-centeredandgivetoomuchimportancetoappearanceandmaterialcomforts,especiallythosewhoareso-calledpost-80sandpost-90sgenerationinmainlandChina.

Forexample,asamemberofpost90s,Ialsohavethesamecharacteristicsaswhathasbeenmentionedabove.Ialwayscomplaintoomuchaboutthedifficultiesinlife,andmyfuturecareeraswell.Inlife,Icangethurteasily.Sometimes,Ifeelthatmyclosefriendsarenotsointimatewithme,becauseIalwaysthinkthatshedoesn'ttellmeanythingwhichIthinksheshouldtellme.WithoutfriendsIfeellonely,andmylifebecomesgloomyasifIcouldn'tlivewithnofriends.Icanbeeasilydefeatedbyproblemslikethese.Asawell-educatedcollegestudent,IamalwaysveryconfidentthatIcanfindthejobthatIwantveryeasily.Butthroughsearchingforthepart-timejobs,Ifindthatthesocietyisfullofcompetitionwhichgivesmealotofpressure.Whymylifeisfilledwithsomanydifficulties?Icanhardlybearsuchharshpressureinlife.Maybe,almosteverybodyhasahardtimedealingwithproblemsinlifelikeme.Weareso-calledstrawberrygeneration.

Thereisafiercecomplaininthesocietythatthestrawberrygenerationissoweakthatpeoplealldoubttheirabilitiestoadapttothecurrentsociety.Thisisreallybigtroublethatneedusalltosolve.Notonlystrawberrygenerationthemselves,butalsoalltheinstitutionsanddepartmentsinthesocietyshouldundertaketheresponsibilitytocopewiththebigproblemexist