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麻烦雅思高手和作文能者,帮忙小妹看看雅思大作文..内容:剑桥8T2看看能有几分,怎么improveWaysofcommunicationandinteractionhavechangedduetothedevelopmentofthetechnology.Thetopicofwhetheritispositiveand
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麻烦雅思高手和作文能者,帮忙小妹看看雅思大作文..内容:剑桥8T2看看能有几分,怎么improve

Waysofcommunicationandinteractionhavechangedduetothedevelopmentofthetechnology.Thetopicofwhetheritispositiveandnegativetointeractwithothersthroughtechnology.

Firstandforemost,convenienceoftherapid-developingtechnologymakesglobalcommunicationeasierthanfasterthanbefore.Forexample,wehadtowaitforamonthtohearfromsomebodyfewyearsago.Butnow,waitingwillneverhappenincurrentsociety,wecanusee-mailandMSNtodeliverthemessagesdirectly.Likewise,hearingfromfriendsandfamilyisalsoquick.WecanevenuseSkypetotalkwithfriendsonline.Forinstance,ifpeopleareinemergency,theycanusephonetocontacttheperson.Ifyouareillandyoucannotmovetothehospital,youcanphonetheemergencycall,thenhospitalwillsendtheambulanceimmediately.Consequently,thesebeneficialdevelopmentbringsnolimitforfriendsandrelativesindifferentcountriesinfullmeasureanditgivesmoresafetyandconveniencetopeople'slife.

Nevertheless,thiscausesnegativedevelopmentaswell.PeopleusedthismethodtomakefriendsonInternet.Thisisprevailingthesedays.However,therearesomecheatingpersonalinformationonlinebecauseoftheinformationexplosion.Peoplemakefriendbytalkingtosomeoneunknownonnet.IthinkthiscontainsriskandjeopardyduetotheunfamiliarbackgroundofyourInternet-friend.Furthermore,ifpeoplegetusedtocommunicatewithothersinthefrontofthecomputerscreen,talkingabilitytothepublicwillbedegraded.

Technologybringsbothpositiveandnegativeeffectstothewaysofinteraction.Frommypointofview,peopleinteractwithothers,usingtechnology,hadmoreadvantagesthanthedrawbacksofit.

孙惠芹回答:
  大概看了一下“IthinkthiscontainsriskandjeopardyduetotheunfamiliarbackgroundofyourInternet-friend.”此句型用的太过频繁,建议改为sb.suppose+从句或sb.claim+从句或sb.agree+从句或第一人称时...
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