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大家帮我看看我这作文的句型,大小写等有没有问题呀MyE-palIwas12whenIlearnedhowtouseInternettochat.Myfirste-friendcalledJim.HeisEnglish.Heisalsoamiddleshoolstudent.Heiskindandfriendly.Ilearnalotfrom
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大家帮我看看我这作文的句型,大小写等有没有问题呀

MyE-pal

Iwas12whenIlearnedhowtouseInternettochat.Myfirste-friendcalledJim.

HeisEnglish.Heisalsoamiddleshoolstudent.Heiskindandfriendly.Ilearnalotfromhim.Iamhappyhim.

SuchashowtosendE-mailandhowtousetheInternetinmystudy.MostimportantweoftenchatinEnlish.WithhishelpmyEnglishimprovesveryquickly.AndIcantypeveryfastnow.Ilikemynetfriendverymuch.

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  1.Myfirste-friendiscalledJim.2.HeisEnglish.Heisalsoamiddleschoolstudent.3.Icanlearnalotfromhim,suchashowtosendE-mailandhowtousetheInternetinmystudy.这样写较好4.Mostim...
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