Auniversityis,toagreatextent,ameltingpot.Everyone[who]studiesandlivesthere[brings][hisorher]ownpeculiaritiestoenrichtheuniversity'sculture,[makingit]easierfor[himorher]tostudyharderundersuchstrong[,diverse]atmosphere. 　　Whenyoustudy[at]auniversity,you'llalwaysfindyourselfbombardedwithdifferentviewsornewoptions,[forcing]youtothinkmoreanddevelopyourowncriticalthinkingskills.[Through]theprocessofthinking,criticizingandtakingstockofyourself,you'lltrulyabsorbsomethingnew[that]willhelpyoubecomemorecreative[and]mature. 　　Anotherbigplusto[studying]atauniversityisthatyoucancapitalizeonthecolorfulactivities.[Attendingvarious]activitieswillhelpyouinteractwithotherstudentsanddeveloptheinterpersonalskills[neededtosucceedlaterinlife]. 　　Note:YourEnglishisfine,butyouneedtobemorecarefulofgrammaticalinconsistenciesandrun-onsentences.Inthefirstparagraph,ifusingasingularnounappearsconfusing,trysubstituting"everyone"with"students,"thentheparagraphwillreadsmoother: 　　Auniversityis,toagreatextent,ameltingpot.Studentswhostudyandlivetherebringtheirownpeculiaritiestoenrichtheuniversity'sculture,makingiteasierforthemtostudyharderundersuchstrong,diverseatmosphere. 　　Keepupthegoodwork!