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短文改错Dearheadmaster,Iwassorrytotellyouthatihateanuntidydinin短文改错Dearheadmaster,IwassorrytotellyouthatIhateanuntidydininghallinourschool.Ihavealreadynoticedmanytimesbeforeitthatsomestudentleave
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短文改错Dearheadmaster,Iwassorrytotellyouthatihateanuntidydinin
短文改错Dearheadmaster,IwassorrytotellyouthatIhateanuntidydininghallinourschool.Ihavealreadynoticedmanytimesbeforeitthatsomestudentleavetheleftoveronthetableorontheground,thatmakesthehallbookunpleasantforustoeatin.Somestudentsseemtotreatitasifitisarubbisharea.Ihavesomeadvices.First,getthestudentstoformgoodhabits.Second.makethosewhoarefounddroplittertidyupthehallafterallthestudentshavefinishedourmeals.Third,putsomesignsaskingthestudentsbethoughtfuloftheirbehavior.Myideasmaynotbeverygood.soIhopeyoutaketheseintoconsideration.
钮金真回答：
更正在括号处标出,总共十处错误,保证准确率!
Dearheadmaster,
IwassorrytotellyouthatIhate(an改成the)untidydininghallinourschool.Ihavealreadynoticedmanytimesbefore(去掉it)thatsome(student改成students)leavethe(leftover改成leftovers)onthetableorontheground,(that改成which)makesthehalllookunpleasantforustoeatin.Somestudentsseemtotreatitasifit(is改成were)arubbisharea.Ihavesome(advices改成advice).First,getthestudentstoformgoodhabits.Second.makethosewhoarefound(drop改成dropping)littertidyupthehallafterallthestudentshavefinished(our改成their)meals.Third,putsomesignsaskingthestudents(加入to)bethoughtfuloftheirbehavior.Myideasmaynotbeverygood.(so改成but)Ihopeyoutaketheseintoconsideration.
估计多出的一处错误,是楼主打字有误所致.
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