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我这篇作文能得多少分?满分15Warm-heartedandhelpfulpersonMyfriendTinaisaWarm-heartedandhelpfulgirl,whosavedaboyfromfreezeriverwithherdog.Notlongago,Tinawastakingherdogforawalknearariver,whileshewaswalking,
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我这篇作文能得多少分?满分15
Warm-heartedandhelpfulperson
MyfriendTinaisaWarm-heartedandhelpfulgirl,whosavedaboyfromfreezeriverwithherdog.
Notlongago,Tinawastakingherdogforawalknearariver,whileshewaswalking,shesawaboyplayingonthebridge.“Howdangeroushenboywas!”Tinathought,meanwhile,theboyfellintotheriver,andwithoutmorethought,Tinajumpedintotherivertohelptheboyleftdangerousaway.Unfortunately,inthatthecoldwater,Tinawasseizedofpanicanymore,“Oh!god,saveus!”Tinaprayed,andthen,thelegendreallyhappened!Herdog,allofasudden,jumpedintotheriverandtouchthemout!
Atlast,Tinaandthatboybothweresafty.WecanlearnfromTinawithherbravery,herhelpful,andherwarm-hearted,andTinasaidintheend:“Helpingpeopleisresponsibleofus!ForallIdon'thaveanyrepay,itmakesmefeelsosatisfied!”
李明哲回答：
还可以,给13吧!
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