麻烦各位英语高手帮我看看这篇文章有什么语法等方面的问题,顺便告诉我该如何修改,MyvacationIhadascarybutinterestingsummervacation.MyparentsandIwenttoHainanbyplane.Itwasveryfast.Aftergettingthere,th|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

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麻烦各位英语高手帮我看看这篇文章有什么语法等方面的问题,顺便告诉我该如何修改,MyvacationIhadascarybutinterestingsummervacation.MyparentsandIwenttoHainanbyplane.Itwasveryfast.Aftergettingthere,th

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麻烦各位英语高手帮我看看这篇文章有什么语法等方面的问题,顺便告诉我该如何修改,

Myvacation

Ihadascarybutinterestingsummervacation.MyparentsandIwenttoHainanbyplane.Itwasveryfast.Aftergettingthere,theweatherishot,andanumberofpeoplewereworeshoesandT-shirt.

Thefirstday,wewenttoarestaurantandatesomeseafoodlikefish,octopus.Theyweredelicious.

Onthesecondday,theweatherstillhot.Wewenttothesea.Myparentswentswimming.ButIwentdivingintheseaandplayedthebeachvolleyball.Weweretiredbuthappy.Thenwewenttothehotel.Weplayedgobangandrelaxingtherefortwohours.Afterthat,wetakeashiponthesea,whenIlookedoutofareallyshark.IweresoscariedthatIcouldn'tmove.Luckily,thesharkwasquicklyleft.

Thethirdday,myparentsandIvisitedfriends.Theywereveryfriendly.Andtheywithwewenttovisitedamuseum.Itwasverybig.AndIsawsomekindsofbutterflies.Theywereverybeautiful.AndIlearnedalotoftheirlivinghabits.Weweresurprise.

Whenwethere,timegoesquickly.Itistimeforleavingthere.AndIthinkHainanwasagoodplacetohavefun.IhopetogoHainanagain.

李保春回答：

　　"坐飞机",一般不用byplane这种说法,这是明显的中国式英语.老外一般用byair.即我和爸妈坐飞机去海南这句改为：myparentsandIwenttoHainanbyair. 　　fast 不用来形容旅途的快捷,又是中国式英语.你想表达的是坐飞机很快,用itwasveryquick比较好. 　　因为天气热这句话,你不能直接放在里面,因为是单独的句子了,你必须加连接词. 　　改为：Aftergettingthere,becauseofthehotweather,anumberof.(去掉and）. 　　第一天,应该是Onthefirstday,你少了一个on. 　　fish和octopus之间最好加个and.即：　　ate someseafoodlikefishsandoctopus. 　　第二天,天气依旧很热.你少了be动词.Onthesecondday,theweatherWASstillhot. 　　playvolleyball,不需要the.paly soccer,play tennis.球类运动都不要加定冠词. 　　Weplayedgobangandrelaxingtherefortwohours这句应该改为Weplayedgobangandrelaxedtherefortwohours. 　　Afterthat,wetakeashiponthesea,whenIlookedoutofareallyshark这句应该改为we tookashipatsea,andIfoundedoutarealshark.错误太多,首先take应该是过去式,然后,发现一条鲨鱼用的短语应该是found out,而不是look out.look out 是小心的意思.最后,真的鲨鱼是real shark,不是really shark,really不做形容词. 　　Andtheywithwewenttovisitedamuseum.这句改为And they visitedamuseumwithme.去参观博物馆直接用visit就行了,干嘛要用gotovisit,老外不会这么说英语.withme不能放在they的后面. 　　AndIlearnedalotoftheirlivinghabits应该是learn a lot about their living habits.这里用learn about 更好. 　　Weweresurprise这里你想表达我们都震惊了,应该用surprised.不是surprise,这是动词不是形容词. 　　差不多就这些,简单给你改改,基本每句话都有错,你的英语还需要努力学习. 　　全手打,

秦克云回答：

　　能不能具体改改，我期末考要用。还有“theweatherishot,andanumberofpeoplewereworeshoesandT-shirt.”是不是要改成“becauseofthehotweather，anumberofpeoplewereworeshoesandT-shirt.”？

李保春回答：

　　这还不具体啊，我每句话都帮你改了哇，你是要我帮你全文改好放进来？你先采纳我的回答吧，我帮你改就是了，两分钟的事儿。