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【Notagoldmine（中译英）大家帮我看看哪里改写错了.SaturdayNovember.13th2010Sunny19-22degreeCelsiusNotagoldmineThedreamoffindingmissingtreasuresnearlycametruerecently.Anewmachinecalledrevealerhasbeeninvented】

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Notagoldmine（中译英）大家帮我看看哪里改写错了.

SaturdayNovember.13th2010Sunny19-22degreeCelsius

Notagoldmine

Thedreamoffindingmissingtreasuresnearlycametruerecently.Anewmachinecalledrevealerhasbeeninvented.Itwasusedtodetectgoldwhichwasburiedunderground.Thismachinewasusedinacavebytheseashorewherepiratesusedtostoregold.Thepiratesusedtoburygoldinthatcavebuttheyfailedtotakeitaway.Asearchingpartyarmedbythesenewmachinesenteredinthiscaveandtheyhopedtofindouttheburiedgold.Whentheleaderexaminedthesoilnearlythecaveentrancethemachineshowedtherewasgoldunderground.Theteammembersweresoexcitedthattheydugaholetwofeetdeepandonlyfoundaworthlesscoinatlast.Butthememberscontinuedtosearcheverywhereincaveonce.Therewasnotingtobefoundbutanemptymetaltrunk.Evenso,manypeoplestilltrustedthatrevealerwoulddetectsomevaluablethingssoon.

郭晓波回答：

　　Thedreamoffindingmissingtreasuresnearlycametruerecently.Anewmachinecalledrevealerhasbeeninvented.Itwasusedtodetectgoldwhichwasburiedunderground.ThismachinewasusedinacaveNEARTHEseashorewherepiratesusedtostoregold.Thepiratesusedtoburygoldinthatcavebuttheyfailedtotakeitaway.AsearchingpartyarmedWITHthesenewmachinesenteredthiscaveandtheyhopedtofindouttheburiedgold.Whentheleaderexaminedthesoilnearthecaveentrancethemachineshowedtherewasgoldunderground.Theteammembersweresoexcitedthattheydugaholetwofeetdeepandonlyfoundaworthlesscoin.Butthememberscontinuedtosearcheverywhereincave.Therewasnothingtobefoundbutanemptymetaltrunk.Evenso,manypeoplestilltrustedthatTHErevealerwoulddetectsomevaluablethingssoon 　　只有几个地方,我觉得读的有点不顺,其它地方都很好