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点评一篇英语作文.一篇初三的作文,内容基本已经写完整了,希望找出哪里有语法错误,和需要修改的地方IdolMyidolisastrongmanwhonamesJohnCena.HeistheWWE'ssignatureplayers,butalsoanexcellentactorand
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点评一篇英语作文.一篇初三的作文,内容基本已经写完整了,希望找出哪里有语法错误,和需要修改的地方
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MyidolisastrongmanwhonamesJohnCena.HeistheWWE'ssignatureplayers,butalsoanexcellentactorandsinger.
Healwayssays,'Nevergiveup'.Andhehasdoneeverythingtocomplywiththissentence.That'swhyhedidnotexperiencethelegendaryandillustriousorigin,butthetoughguywithunremittingeffortshavebeentoday.
Ithink'Nevergiveup'isthemainthingthatIcanlearnfromhim.
上面是我写的作文,内容不要改变,希望找出不通顺的帮我修改修改,还有语法错误等.把修改的写出来.
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MyIdolMyidolisastrongmanwhosenameisJohnCena.HeisnotonlytheWWE'ssignatureplayers,butalsoanexcellentactorandsinger.Healwayssays,'Nevergiveup'....
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