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【我的初二英语演讲稿帮忙修改下.thanks~MyfutureInthefuture,IwanttoliveinBrithshVirginIsland.Iwillliveinanarpartmentwithmyfriends.Wecankeepapetdog.Iwillworkforacompany.I'mgoingtomakelotsofmoneywhenI】
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我的初二英语演讲稿帮忙修改下.thanks~
Myfuture
Inthefuture,IwanttoliveinBrithshVirginIsland.Iwillliveinanarpartmentwithmyfriends.Wecankeepapetdog.Iwillworkforacompany.I'mgoingtomakelotsofmoneywhenIamyoung.AndthenIwilltreavelallovertheworld.Seedifferentpeopleanddifferentplaces.Thentakelotsofphotos.IfI'mfree,IwillgotothebeachinVirgin,surftheInternet,playCDs,hangoutwithfriends...Icanwritearticulsanddrawpictures.Thelifecanbeveryeasyandinteresting.IcandowhatIlike.
so,howcanImakemydreamcometrue?MaybeI'mgoingtostudyinHongKongUnivercity.Iwillmayjorin(经济?).Iwillstudyhardandlearnlotsofthings.ThenIcangotoVirgintofindajob.ThenIwillworkashardaspossible.
IhopeIwillhavearelaxinglifeinthefuture.
可能还是有很多不符合语言习惯还有一些词不达意的另外还不是特别充实毕竟要三分钟差不多嘛...
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MyfutureInthefuture,IwanttoliveinBrithshVirginIsland.Iwanttoliveinanarpartmentwithmyfriends.Wecankeepapetdogandplaywithit.Iwillworkforacompanyandtrymybesttodothework.I'mgoingtomakelotsofmoneywhenIgrowup.AndthenIwilltreavelallovertheworldbecauseIwanttoseedifferentpeopleanddifferentplaces.Thentakelotsofphotosandsharethemwithmyfriends.IfI'mfree,IwillgotothebeachinVirgin,surftheInternet,playCDs,hangoutwithfriends...Icanwritearticulsanddrawpictures.Thelifecanbeveryeasyandinteresting.IcandowhatIlike.so,howcanImakemydreamcometrue?MaybeI'mgoingtostudyinHongKongUnivercity.AndIwillstudyhardandlearnlotsofthings.ThenIcangotoVirgintofindajob.ThenIwillworkashardaspossible.IhopeIcanachievemydream.加油哦~!
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