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Aboutmyhobby,Aboutmyhobby,Iliketoseethemovie,enjoysuffingontheinternetandhavingsports.Igothefitnesscentoreveryweek.帮我看看能不能把句子写得更好?
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Aboutmyhobby,

Aboutmyhobby,Iliketoseethemovie,enjoysuffingontheinternetandhavingsports.Igothefitnesscentoreveryweek.

帮我看看能不能把句子写得更好?

石教英回答:
  movie这里要用watch不是seesurfing不是suffingsports是play的center不是centor…是IgotoMyhobbiesincludewatchingmovies,surfingontheinternet,andplayingsports.Ialsoenjoyvisitingthefit...
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