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请帮我修改一下这篇英文短文Abearhaveashop.Oneday,alittlerabbitcamehere.Shesaid:"Excuseme,isthereanycarrotstosell?"thebearanswered:"no!".Thenextday,therabbitcameagain,shesaid:"Excuseme,Isthereanycarrotstose
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请帮我修改一下这篇英文短文

Abearhaveashop.Oneday,alittlerabbitcamehere.Shesaid:"

Excuseme,isthereanycarrotstosell?"thebearanswered:"no!".

Thenextday,therabbitcameagain,shesaid:"Excuseme,Isthereanycarrotstosell?"thebearanswered:"no!"Thethirdday,therabbitcameagain.shesaid:"excuseme,isthereanycarrotstosell?"Thebearisveryveryangry.Hesaid:NO,ifyoucomeagain,IwillcutyourearswithScissor!"thefourthday,therabbitcameagain.shesaid:"Excuseme,isthereanyscissortosell?"thebearsaid:"no!",“sogreat!”therabbitsaid:"thatIbuycarrots”.

有没有什么错误?特别是时态,怎样改会生动一些?请大家给些意见,另外,小白兔吓得捂着耳朵跑了怎么翻译?

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  Abearrunsashop.Oneday,alittlerabbitcametohisshopandsaid:"Excuseme,isthereanycarrottosell?"thebearanswered:"no."Thenextday,therabbitcameagain.Shesaid:"Excuseme,istherean...
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