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帮忙改一下小弟这篇托福综合写作作文~Theauthorbelievesthatthe''swampgas''hypothesisfaroutweighsthe"outerobject"explanation.However,thelecturehasatotallydifferentideaonthetopicmadeinthereading.Thefirstpoint
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帮忙改一下小弟这篇托福综合写作作文~

Theauthorbelievesthatthe''swampgas''hypothesisfaroutweighsthe"outerobject"explanation.However,thelecturehasatotallydifferentideaonthetopicmadeinthereading.

Thefirstpointthelecturerusestocastdoubtonthereadingisthattheabsenceoffragmentonearthcannotsupporttheideathattheexplosionwasnotcausedbyanouterspaceobject.Theauthorisconvincedthatiftheaccidentwascausedbyanasteroid,theremustbeahugecrateronthesurfaceoftheground,yetnotracesarefoundinthearea.However,thespeakerpointsoutthatafter90years'ofnaturalchanges,thetracescanbeeliminatedcompletedly.

Inthesecondplace,thereadingmadethepointthattheabsenceofhugecratershasweakenedthetheorytosomeextend.Tothecontrary,thespeakerstatesthattheasteroidcouldexplodebeforeitreachedtheground,soitisquitereasonabletofindnothingaftertheexplosion.

Lastly.thelecturerenhancedherstandpointbyaddingthefactthatthewholeprocesscaninvolvealargeareainsteadjustonespot,whichisnotanticipatedthetheauthor.

Inconclusion,thepassaggecompletelyrefusesthereading.

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