遣词造句中最精彩的句子有三个特点： 1、细节丰富：用细节表达你的所见所想； 2、避免重复：重复是水平低的表现； 3、化繁为简：当别人苦苦学习复合句时，你已然拥有了最神奇的造句技术…… （一）如何做到细节丰富？ 1、抽象变具体 口诀：尽力使用表意明确的单词，并适当增加细节成分。 【例1】 I go to school everyday. I ride to school everyday. I ride to school every morning. With the sun rising from the east, I, together with Big White, ride to school at 6:00 every morning, feeling rather excited. 【例2】 Big White is a good teacher. Big White is a kind, patient and knowledgeable English teacher. Young as Big White is, he is a kind, patient and knowledgeable English teacher who knows how to enlighten us students. 【例3】（2010北京卷情景作文第二幅图） I went to the station to buy the tickets. In the afternoon, I took the subway to the Beijing railway station to buy the tickets. In the afternoon, I took the subway line No.2 to the Beijing railway station to buy the tickets. 2、裸奔穿外衣 名词不可裸奔：1、多个形容词；2、同位语；3、定语从句；4、非谓语动词作定语； 动词带上情感：5、小状语位置；6、多个动词并列 【1】在名词前面（多个）形容词 形容词是名词的衣饰，衣饰要华美。 【例1】你应该理解你的妈妈。 You should understand your mom. You should understand your kind, dear and hardworking mom. 【例2】 Once there was a family living in a cabin under a tree. It's branches and leaves protected the family. Once there was a happy family living in a small cabin under a huge tree. It's strong branches and thick leaves protected the family from wind and rain. 【2】名词后面加上同位语 同位语就是名词的“等价物”！ 【例1】我们应该掌握英语。 我们青少年应该掌握英语这门世界上最广泛使用的外语. We teenagers are supposed to master English, the most widely used foreign language in the world. 【例2】我们高中生应对我们自己的未来负责。(be responsible for sth) We high school students are supposed to be responsible for our own future. 【例3】他们那些外国人对我们中国人评价很高。(speak highly of) They foreigners speak highly of us Chinese people. 【3】名词后面加上定语从句 当汉语中用“动词+的”修饰名词时，英语中用定语从句。 【例1】他所工作的地方离这儿很远。 The place is far away from here. The place where he works is far away form here. 【例2】她照顾了十多年的那个老人上个月去世了。 The old man whom she had looked after for ten years passed away last month. 【例3】他是一个能与我荣辱与共的真正的朋友。 He is a true friend of mine, who can share joy and sadness with me at any time. 【4】非谓语动词作定语 （后述） 【5】小状语位置加副词 “助系情之后，实义动词之前。” 【例】 English is obviously of great importance. I really want to help you. You should deeply understand your mom. I can definitely do it. 万能单词： undoubtedly 毫无疑问地 obviously 显然地 evidently 明显地 definitely 当然地 apparently 显然；表面上 【6】多个相关动词并列使用 【例1】Your mom loves you. Your mom gave birth to you, has brought you up and loves you the most in the world. Your mom loves and cherishes you. 【例2】You should understand your mom. Your should understand, love and respect your mom. 3、巧加小尾巴 六个尾巴句型： 1、表原因 ...，for... ..., because... ..., considering that... in that... owing to that... 2、表结果 ...，so... ..., as a result, ... ..., therefore, ... ..., （and ）consequently, ... ..., （and ）accordingly, ... 3、表目的 ... to do sth ... in order to do sth ... so as to do sth ... in order that... ... so that... 4、表程度 ... so + adj/adv + that... 步骤一：adj/adv 前面加so 步骤二：句尾加that 步骤三：that 后面用一个句子描述adj/adv的程度。 5、表条件 If..., ... 如果 As long as..., ... 只要 6、评论刚刚写完的一句话