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谁帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语病?NewYearonceagaingoingtocome,IamveryhappybecauseIwillbealongoneyearsold.14yearsold,oranunknownworld,mustalsobefullofupsanddowns.However,Ireallylookforwardtoth
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谁帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语病?

NewYearonceagaingoingtocome,IamveryhappybecauseIwillbealongoneyearsold.14yearsold,oranunknownworld,mustalsobefullofupsanddowns.However,Ireallylookforwardtotheadventofthenewyear!

我很着急的~~~~

1、NewYearoncewillarrival,Iareveryjoyful,becauseofIwillgrowone-year-old.14-year-old,bestillaunknownworld,definitelyisalsotohavebeenfullofjoysandsorrowsoflife.However,IbefondofexpectingtheNewYearapproaching!

2、NewYearonceagaingoingtocome,IamveryhappybecauseIwillbealongoneyearsold.14yearsold,oranunknownworld,mustalsobefullofupsanddowns.However,Ireallylookforwardtotheadventofthenewyearah!

3、NewYear'scomingagain,Iamveryhappy,becauseIwilllongage.14yearsold,oranunknownworld,certainlyalsofulloffrustrations.However,IexpectthecomingNewYear!

那么,这几篇短文那个是对的呢?

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  NewYearcomesagaininanblinkofaneye,IamveryhappybecauseIamgoingtobeoneyearelder.14yearsold,oranunknownworld,alsomustbefullofupsanddowns.However,Ireallylookforwardof...
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