谁帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语病?
NewYearonceagaingoingtocome,IamveryhappybecauseIwillbealongoneyearsold.14yearsold,oranunknownworld,mustalsobefullofupsanddowns.However,Ireallylookforwardtotheadventofthenewyear!
我很着急的~~~~
1、NewYearoncewillarrival,Iareveryjoyful,becauseofIwillgrowone-year-old.14-year-old,bestillaunknownworld,definitelyisalsotohavebeenfullofjoysandsorrowsoflife.However,IbefondofexpectingtheNewYearapproaching!
2、NewYearonceagaingoingtocome,IamveryhappybecauseIwillbealongoneyearsold.14yearsold,oranunknownworld,mustalsobefullofupsanddowns.However,Ireallylookforwardtotheadventofthenewyearah!
3、NewYear'scomingagain,Iamveryhappy,becauseIwilllongage.14yearsold,oranunknownworld,certainlyalsofulloffrustrations.However,IexpectthecomingNewYear!
那么,这几篇短文那个是对的呢?