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|correctthemistakesinthecomposition|.[1]Asmysincerefriendsleft,I'mnowreallyveryfear.[2]I'mafraidofthechangesinmymind,mytemperamentandbehavior.[3]Mostofthepeoplearoundmenowisquietsenseless,evensilly.[4]Iterriblyfee
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|correctthemistakesinthecomposition|
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[1]Asmysincerefriendsleft,I'mnowreallyveryfear.
[2]I'mafraidofthechangesinmymind,mytemperamentandbehavior.
[3]Mostofthepeoplearoundmenowisquietsenseless,evensilly.
[4]IterriblyfeelthatI'mshortofimaginationallthemore.
[5]Mycourageseemshavetobeforgottenforalongtime.
[6]Yeh...itstheageofperplexity.MaybeI'monthewrongpath.
[7]Ijustwanttotakeeverythingeazy.
[8]ButIhavesomeresponsibilitythatIshouldn't,alsocouldn'tabandon.
[9]Iwillcontinuedoingmyway,withoutanymorethinking.
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请挑出这九句的语法错误,和语句不流畅之処{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的},并改正.
注：[9]想表达的是：「我将继续做我的事/走我的道路/行从我的方式,不去想太多/不去做多余的思考」
何晓蕊回答：
1.第一名的话,really和very可去掉其中一个,典型的chinglish,真的很害怕.2.可以去掉第二个my3.is改成are4.加上评语I5.改为seemstohavebeenforgetten6.Its改为It's7.如果不是easy拼错了的话,试着改everything为...
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