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【帮我改改我的英语作文吧(高中)谁能帮我修改我的作文,老师说我错了好多,可是我要是能找的出来就不会错了,它的题目是“为什么越来越多的城市人愿意去乡村度过周末.而乡村人却越来越】
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帮我改改我的英语作文吧(高中)

谁能帮我修改我的作文,老师说我错了好多,可是我要是能找的出来就不会错了,

它的题目是“为什么越来越多的城市人愿意去乡村度过周末.而乡村人却越来越愿意来城市度过周末”100词左右

Nowadays,withthedevelopmentofsociety,anincreasingnumberofpeoplelivinginthecitytendtohaveaweekendinthecountryside.Theydrivecarstothecountrysidefromthecityforfishing、hikingduringtheirweekend.Theyclaimthatthefreshairisofgreatbenefittotheirhealth.Inadditiontheycanenjoythebeautifulviewofthecountryside.Theycanrelaxthemselvesaswell.

Onthecontrary,thepeoplelivinginthecountrysidearelikelytotakethebusestothecityforshoppingorwatchingmoviessothattheycanimprovetheirlife.

Inthecaseofme,Ithink,althoughthecitywouldbeabletoalotofconvinced,butitbeadmittedthat,cityhasmoreairwithpollutedandmorenoise,whencomparedwiththecountryside.Therefore,Iprefertogotothecountrysideduringmyweekend.

李航回答:
  前面的语言错误倒没有,但是比较啰嗦,我改后面的吧:Onthecontrary,thepeoplelivinginthecountrysidearelikelytotakethebusestothecityforshoppingorwatchingmoviessothattheycanimprove...
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