求托福TPO1的综合写作作文批改

Inthelecture,theprofessor

castsdoubtonthereadingpassage`sideathatofferingemployeesthefour-day

workingoptionmayincreasethecompany`seconomyandemployees`lifequality.

Theprofessorassertsthatfour-dayworkingoptionmayhavenothingtodowith

thecompanyoremployee.

Tobeginwith,theprofessor

arguesthatitwoulddecreasethecompany`sprofitsiftheyshortenthe

workweek.Accordingtothereadingpassage,employeeswouldmakefewersignificant

errorsintheirworkbecauseoftheincreasingrestingtime,andthecompany

couldhiremorepeoplewiththesamemoneytheypayedforfive-dayworkweek.In

oppositiontothisarguement,theprofessorsaysthathiremorepeoplemeans

thatthecompanywouldpaymoreforfreshmen`straining,andnewemployeesneed

workingspaceandcomputers.

Ontopofthat,theprofessor

claimsthatfour-dayworkweekwouldincreasetheemployees`pressure.The

readingpassagedescribesthatthispolicycanshifttheemployees`workloadto

others.Butonthecontrary,thatprofessorstatesthatthecompanywould

increasetheexpectation,theywouldwantemployeesfinishthewholeworking

theydidinfivedaysinfourday,itcanincreasethejobdifficultyandwould

makepeoplealwaysoverworking.

Lastly,theprofessorrebuts

thereading`spointthatthispolicyisgoodforindividualemployees,by

demonstratingthatmorefreetimewouldmakepeopledecreasethejobstability.

Theprofessorpointsoutthatthecompanywouldbewillingtochoosetheperson

wholikestoworkfivedays,andthefour-dayworkingemployeeswouldhave

risksloosingjob.