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帮忙看下我写的雅思写作文章.请多多指教Manyanimalsandplantsaredyingouttoday.Whatarethecausesandwhatareyoursolutions?题目是这个...下面就是我的了Watisundercontroversyisthesideofanimalsandplantsared
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帮忙看下我写的雅思写作文章.

请多多指教

Manyanimalsandplantsaredyingouttoday.Whatarethecausesandwhatareyoursolutions?题目是这个...下面就是我的了

Watisundercontroversyisthesideofanimalsandplantsaredyingout.Asviewonthisissuevaryfrompeopletopeople,thereforethereisboundtoalong-lastingdebateonit.

Firstly,from19thto21thcentury,greatdevelopmentoftechnologywereleadingtoairpollutionswhatisthemainreason.Thatistosaywemustbetodominatingtheairpollutions.

Secondly,withthedevelopmentofthepersonslifestyle.Almostallpersonsarerelaxing.Theymaybeforgettingtoprotecingtheenvironmentandtheyareonlytoenjoylife.Thatisthesecondreason.Thisismeantobeimprovingpersonsconsciousness.

Thirdly,manyrichpersonswantstoholdingmorelands,thereforetheymustbetoconstructingmoreandmorebuildings.Manyanimalsandplantsarenotobreathe,whatisthethirdreason.thenpersonsmusttobebindingtoitsrisks.

Tosumup,i'dliketodomanyavailabilitythingsforanimalsandplantsinmypower.Ihopeallpersonscandoingwithme.Ithinkourworldswillbebetter.

李忠明回答:
  themostobviousreasonisthatourenvironmenthasbeendeterioratedbyhumanactivitiesalot.forexample,1theever-increasingusedvehicleshasalwaysgivenrisetothedeclineintheairquality....
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