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求批改作文~whentalkedabouttheheatedquestionwhetherlivinginaextendedfamilyisgoodornot,somepeopledeemthatitplaysanindispesableroleinreinforcefamilyties.someothers,whoobjectedtoit,arguethatitisnotessention.iam
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whentalkedabouttheheatedquestionwhetherlivinginaextendedfamilyisgoodornot,somepeopledeemthatitplaysanindispesableroleinreinforcefamilyties.someothers,whoobjectedtoit,arguethatitisnotessention.iaminclinedtotheformorduetothreereasons.

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  修改的地方都用序号标出来了whentalked(1)abouttheheatedquestionwhetherlivingina(2)extendedfamilyisgoodornot,somepeopledeemthatitplaysanindispesable(4)roleinreinforce(5)fami...
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