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请英语达人来点评一下这篇作文,这是一篇高中生作文,要纠正一下语法或拼写错误,并写出需要改进的地方DearSirandMadam:MynameisLiHua,Iamastudentofyourschoolsummercamp,Myaimtowritethisletteris
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请英语达人来点评一下这篇作文,这是一篇高中生作文,要纠正一下语法或拼写错误,并写出需要改进的地方

DearSirandMadam:

MynameisLiHua,Iamastudentofyourschoolsummercamp,MyaimtowritethisletteristhatIwanttomakeanappointmentwiththelearningcenter.Thereasonareasfollow.

First,AsaChinese,Wehavethedifferentcookingstyle,ItappearstotheChinese,Weshould

eathotfoodandsoup.butinEngland.Ionlyeatbread.becausethefoodissocoldSecondIhopeyoucangivemeanaccurateaccountofHowtousethelibrarycomputer.Thereisaconfusingforme.

TheMondayafternoonandFridayissuitableformetomeetyouforanother,ifyouareOK,

Pleasecallme:****.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply!

Yours

LiHua

孙焘回答:
  DearSirandMadam:IamLiHua,alsoastudentofyourschoolcamp.Writtingthisletterisbecauseiwanttomakeanappointmentwiththelearningcenter.Herearemyreasons.Firstly,asachinese,...
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