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帮我改下这篇文章的语法和词汇错误Universityentranceexamination,Yes,universityentranceexamination!InChina,noonewilldoubtthatuniversityentranceexaminationcanchangeone’slife.Also,thisexaminationreallychangedmealot.
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帮我改下这篇文章的语法和词汇错误

Universityentranceexamination,Yes,universityentranceexamination!InChina,noonewilldoubtthatuniversityentranceexaminationcanchangeone’slife.Also,thisexaminationreallychangedmealot.TheuniversityentranceexaminationwhichIexperiencedhadspecialmeaningtome.Today,IstillrememberthedayofChineseunittest.IwasconfidentwhenIgotthetestpaper,becauseChinesewasmyadvantagesubject.However,thesadthingisthatIhadnotfinishedthispaper,andIhadnotfinishedthearticle.Whentheteachertookmypaperaway,Ijustwantedtocry.IknewIwouldfail.

“Howaboutyourtest?”mymumasked.

“Ifailed”Icried,Icouldnothelptocrying,“Idon’twanttotakethemathtest,Idon’twanttothetakeEnglishtest.Ihavealreadyfailed.”

“Try,tryagain.Tryyourbest.Don’tgiveup.Everythingwillbeok.”Mymumsaidtome.“Don’tgiveup,don’tgiveup.”

Yes,eventually,Ididn’tgiveup.ItookthemathtestandtheEnglishtest.Tominejoy,theresultwasnotverybadtome.IpassedtheChinesetestandenteredthiscollege.Sometimes,Iwillthinkaboutaquestion.WhatkindofpersonIwouldbe?ifIhadquittedthemathtestandEnglishtestatthattime.MaybeIwouldhaveajobinKFC;maybeIwouldhaveenteredaninternetcollege;maybeIwouldhavetakentheuniversityentranceexaminationinsecondyear.Ican’timagewhatkindofpersonIwouldbe,ifIhadquitted.But,onethingIcanbesureifIhadquittedatthattime,today,Iwouldnothavedeliverymyspeechhere.

Thisisthemostmemorableincidentinmylife,andIthinkthatthisisreallyimpactonmylifealot.Today,tomorrow,andfuture,Iwillnoteasytosay“Iwanttogiveup.”AndeverythingIwilltrymybest,evenitishardtome.

冯波回答:
  InChina,no-onedoubtsthattheuniversityentranceexaminationcanchangeone'slife.Also,thisexaminationreallychangedmealot.TheuniversityentranceexaminationwhichIexperiencedhadspecialmeaningtome.Today,IstillrememberthedayoftheChineseunittest.IwasconfidentwhenIgotthetestpaper,becauseChinesewasmybestsubject.However,thesadthingisthatIdidnotfinishthepaper;Iranoutoftimeontheessay!Whentheteachertookmypaperaway,Ijustwantedtocry.IknewIwouldfail.   “Howwasyourtest?”mymumasked.   “Ifailed”Icried,Icouldnothelpbutcry.“Idon'twanttotakethemathstest,Idon'twanttotaketheEnglishtest.Ihavealreadyfailed.”   “Try,tryagain.Tryyourbest.Don'tgiveup.Everythingwillbeok.”Mymumsaidtome.“Don'tgiveup,don'tgiveup.”   Yes,eventually,Ididn'tgiveup.ItookthemathstestandtheEnglishtest.Tomyjoy,theresultwasnottoobad.IpassedtheChinesetestandenteredcollege.Sometimes,Iwillponderaquestion:whatkindofpersonIwouldbeifIhadquitthemathstestandEnglishtestatthattime?MaybeIwouldhaveajobinKFC;maybeIwouldhaveenteredaninternetcollege;maybeIwouldhavetakentheuniversityentranceexaminationagainayearlater.Ican’timagewhatkindofpersonIwouldbe,ifIhadquitthen.But,onethingIcanbesureofisthatifIhadquitatthattime,todayIwouldnotbedeliveringmyspeechhere.   Thisisthemostmemorableincidentinmylife,andIthinkthatithasreallyhadabigimpactonmylife.Today,tomorrow,andinthefuture,Iwillnotreadilysay“Iwanttogiveup.”andineverythingIwilltrymybest,evenifitishard.   你文章的第一句话doesn'tmakesense,所以给删掉了.花了十分钟帮你改哦,如果能得到你的分,太感激了.嘿嘿~!
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