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AdvantageandDisadvantagesofBeinganOnlyChild
Inrecentyears,raisinganonlychildhasbecomeincreasinglypopularinmycountry.Inthisessay,Iwilllookattheadvantagesanddisadvantagesforchildwhoistheonlyoneinafamily.
Themainadvantageisthattheonlychildcanholdamoresuperiorenvironment.Ontheonhand,theparents,whohavetheonlychild,cancostlessondailylife,thatmeans,theycanprovidetheirsinglechildrenabetterlivingenvironmentlikemovingintoagoodneighborhoodandlettheirchildrenreceiveabettereducation.Ontheotherhand,theonlychildrencanownmorelovefromtheirparentsthanthosehavesiblings,relatively,sincetheonlyonechildsometimesmeansextemelyimportanttoafamily.Asaresult,theonlychildrenaregrowingupwithabetterlivingenviromentfulfilledwithloveprovidedbytheirparents.
However,therecanbedisadvantages.Someonlychildrenmaybecomeselfishonaccountoftheirparents’overspoiling.Thefactis,theonlychildrencanreceivealmosteverythingfromtheirparents,andwhentheyoccuredtosomefrictions,theirparentsalwaysontheirsidenomatterweathertheydidisright.Allofthesemayleadthoughtthatitisacertainthingthatparentsshouldsacrificeforthem.Asaresult,theyseldomcareaboutothersfeelingwhentheygoalongwithothers.
Toconclude,Iamconvincedthattheadvantagesofraisinganonlychildoutweighthedisadvantages.However,theparentsshouldpaymoreattentionononlychild’smentaldevelomentatthesametime,whentheyprovideasuperiorphysicalenvironment.
