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求批改英语作文ShouldSchoolSuspendTroublesomeStudent1.以约30词简要概括新闻内容2.然后以约120词谈谈你的观点,内容包括：（1）你是否支持该校长做法,并陈述理由；（2）假设你是学校校长,谈谈你
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求批改英语作文
ShouldSchoolSuspendTroublesomeStudent
1.以约30词简要概括新闻内容
2.然后以约120词谈谈你的观点,内容包括：
（1）你是否支持该校长做法,并陈述理由；
（2）假设你是学校校长,谈谈你讲如何处理违纪学生,并陈述理由.
Thepassagesaidthataheadmastersuspendedmanytroublesomestudentssoastopunishthem.Asaresult,hisschoolgetbenefitforitandshowsexcellentperformanceinacademic.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,IaminfavoroftheopinionthatDavidHayessuspendedstudentstopunishtheirbadbehavior.Itgoeswithoutsayingthateveryonemakesmistakeintheirlifeandhassomebadbehavior,butweshouldstopthemandcorrectthem.
IfIweretheheadmasterIwouldcallthetroublesomestudentstotheplaygroundandletthemrunaroundthetrackuntiltheyrealizetheirwrongactivities.Foronething,thestudentspaythepricefortheirbadbehavior.Foranother,theycanimprovetheirphysicalfitness
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