Itisaresponseessay,andIwouldappreciateifyoucanprovidemeconstructivefeedbackontheargument,sentencestructures,grammar,organization,criticalreasoningandtransitions. 　　Thankyou 　　Inthistimeandage,scienceandtechnologyareadvancingatanalarmingrate.Itgoeswithoutsayingthattherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologybringsconsiderablebenefitstohumanbeing.Thankstoscience,wenowlivesafer,morecomfortableandconvenientlife.However,othersarguethatitalsobringsusenvironmentalpollutionandenergyshortage.Itotallyagreewithit. 　　Firstly,scienceshouldberesponsibleforenvironmentalissues.Whenweenjoythecomfortandconvenienceofmoderntraffic,alargeamountofexhaustgasfromautomobilesleadstoseriousairpollution.Inaddition,owingtothedevelopmentofmodernagriculturaltechnology,farmerstendtouselotsofchemicalfertilizersandpesticidestoincreasetheyield.Nevertheless,weoftenneglecttheadverseeffectofthesechemicals,whichseverelypoisonourarablesoilandundergroundwater. 　　Besidesenvironmentalpollution,sciencealsoprobablycausesenergyshortage.Withadvancesintechnology,weareabletousethemoderntechnologytoexploitmoreenergy(includingfossilfuel,coal,naturalgasandsoon)tomeetthedemandforthegrowingpopulation.Themorepopulationwehave,themoreenergyweneed.Finallyitresultsinaviciouscirclewiththeenergyconsumptionandthepopulationgrowth.Furthermore,withtheexpansionofindustrialization,requirementforenergyworldwidehasanupwardtrend.Wehaveagreatneedforenergybecauseoftherapidgrowthofoureconomy. 　　Admittedly,somepeopleholdthatwecanreduceenvironmentalpollutionbygreentechnology,andexplorerenewableandcleanenergysuchaswindenergyorsolarenergytosolveenergycrisis.Butthesenewtechnologiesneedalargenumberofinvestmentsonresearchanddevelopment.Mostcountriescannotaffordit.Thereforethesemethodsareinfeasibleintheshortterm. 　　Byawayofconclusion,Ibelievethatitisthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologythatleadstothepollutionofenvironmentandshortageofenergy. 　　根据实际情况进行修改,希望能够帮到你!