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【雅思G类小作文批改!你在超市碰到一个事故,请你给主管写信,要求1.saywhoyouare2.givedetailsabouttheaccident3.suggesthowthesupermarketcouldpreventsimilaraccidents以下为本人信件：dearsir,I'macustomerwho】
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雅思G类小作文批改!
你在超市碰到一个事故,请你给主管写信,要求1.saywhoyouare2.givedetailsabouttheaccident3.suggesthowthesupermarketcouldpreventsimilaraccidents
以下为本人信件：
dearsir,
I'macustomerwhocometoyoursupermaketeverydayforthegoodsIneedinthedailylife.
Buttoday,Ihadbeenhurtbyoneoftheheavinthingswhichwasputonthehighinyourmarket.Asyoursupermakethaslesschairscomparedwhitthelotsofpeople,soIcouldn'tfindachairthatwasfree.Withoutchair,itishardtogetthegoodswhichwereputonthehigh.Ihadcalledtheserversinthemarket,buttheyweretoobusytohelpme.SoIshouldpickeditdownbymyself.AndthenIhadbeenhurtbythethings
thatwereputonthehigh.
SoIwritethislettertosuggestyoutopreventthisaccidenthappenagain.Youshouldaddmorechairsorserversinsidethesupermakettomakepeoplesafety.
seeyou.
TOM
4thDec
饶进军回答：
DearSir./Madam,
MynameisTomandIamacustomerofyoursupermarket.TodayIfellofftheladderwhiletryingtoreachabottleofshampooonthetopshelf.
Alltheothersweresoldout,therewasonlyonebottleleftanditwasputonthetopshelf.Iaskedforhelp,butalltheassistantswerebusy.ThenItriedtogetitbymyself.Ittookmealongtimetofindaladder.Evenwhenistoodonthetopoftheladder,theshampoowasstillveryhardtoreach.TheaccidenthappenedwhenIstoodonthetipofmytoes,Ilostbalanceandfellofftheladder.someotherbottlesfelloffandhitonmyheadaswell.
Afterallhappened,finallytherewasashopassistanttohelpmeout.Luckily,Ionlyhurtmyleftfootankleandthedoctorsaiditwillbefineinacoupleofdays.
IamaveryloyalcustomertoyoursupermarketandIshophereeveryday.Butwhathappenedtodaymakesmeverydisappointed.WhatIsuggesttodoistoaddmorepeopleduringbusyhourssothatcustomerscanbelookedafterwhenneeded.Besides,Ibelieveyoursupermarketneedstotrainyourstafftoimprovetheirservicequalityaswell.Iamsuretherewereassistantssawmestrugglingreachingthebottleonthetopshelfandnobodyofferedhelp.
Ihopeyoucouldgivethisissueyourimmediateattention.Thankyouforyourtime.
YoursSincerely,
Tom
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