请英语高手帮我点评我的这篇英语四级作文,
1：许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2：但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3：我的看法
WhenaskedaboutspringfestivalgalaonCCTV,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.Somepeoplethinkthattheprogramsinspringfestivalgalaareverywonderfulandtheyliketowatch.Inaddition,italreadybecomeaexpectationwhencelebratingspringfestival.
However,therearestillmanypeoplewhodonotagree.Theyholdthatweshouldcanceltheconductofspringfestivalgalabecauseweholdalarge-scaleeveningpartywillspendmuchmoneyandconsumealargenumberofmanpower.Buttherearestillmanypoorpeopleinourcountryandtheyalsohaven'tfoodormoneytocelebratethefestival.
Personally,Iamonthesideoftheformerargument.Foronething,astous,springfestivalisthemostimportantfestival,itmeansthattheoldyearpassedandthenewyearwillcome,soweshouldholdsomewonderfulgalatocelebrateandtowelcomethenewyear.Foranother,therearemanyChineselivingabroad.Andifweholdagalacanmakethemhappyinspringfestivalandcanspreadourculturetoforeigners.
