能不能请老师帮我改一下这篇四级作文.
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicof“PM2.5”.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:
Theairqualityofourlives：
1.城市越大,空气质量恶化越严重；
2.形成空气质量差的原因；
3.我们应该如何应对.
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Thereisnodenyingthatwithanincreasingnumberofsociety`seconomic,theairqualityofourliveshasbecomeamatterofconcernnowadays.
Aswecanseefromthefact,thebiggerthecityis,theworsetheairqualityis.Ofcourse,inouremergingcountry,thereasonsofleadingtoairpollutionaremassive.Fromthepointofmyview,onthetopofthelististhatmoreandmorecarshavebeenusedbyindividualsinthestreet.ThereistheotherpointIhavetotouchagreatnumberoffactoryhasbeenfoundedbycharacterorAdministrationinourcountry.
Astohowtoconfronttheproblemofairpollution,Iharbortheideathatfolkshadbettertotakebusorgoonfootforgoingtowork,ratherthantakecarsofthierself,whichisjusteasy.
