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2.考研原因(reasonsformychoice)

Thereareseveralreasons.,

FirstIliketheChinesemedicineprofession.ChinesemedicineisanimportantpartofTraditionalChineseculture.Ithasalonghistory.

Second,myfatherisaDoctorofChinesemedicine.Undertheinfluenceofhis,Iwanttolearnmoreaboutthisprofession.andtobeagooddoctor.

Thirdly,Ithinkfurtherstudyisstillurgentformetorealizeself-value.Lifeisprecious.Itisnecessarytoseizeanychanceforself-development,especiallyinthiscompetitivemodernworld.

Inaword,Iamlookingforwardtomakingasolidfoundationforfutureprofessionaftertwoyearsstudyhere.

3.研究生期间你的计划(plansinthepostgraduatestudy)

IfIhadthechancetostudyinthisuniversity.Iwilltrymybesttolearntheschoolcurriculum.inthesparetime,Iwillreadalotofbooksaboutchinesemedicine.Takegoodadvantageofinternshipopportunities.Ifpossible,Iwillgoonwithmystudyfordoctoratedegree.

4.介绍你的家乡(abouthometown)

Iamfrom秦皇岛,afamoustouristcity.LocatedinthenortheastofHebeiProvince,thefirstnationalcoastalopencities.itisalsoTheonlycitynamedafteraemperor.Fornow,itisafamousportcityinnorthernChina.2008BeijingOlympicGames‘co-hostcity.Qinhuangdao,knownasthe"backgardenofBeijingandTianjin"reputation.WiththeGreatWall,coastal,eco-tourismresourcessuchasgood.Thereismybelovedhometown.

5.你的家庭(aboutfamily)

Therearefivemembersinmyfamily;myparents,mybrother,mysisterandme.Myfatherisadoctor.Heoftenworkslate.Somostofthehouseworkisdonebymyindustriousmom.MysisterworksinPersonneldepartment

in西安.MybrotherisIntheRussianschool.Werarelytogether.SoImissthemalot.Duringmyprepareingforcominghere,myparents’supporthavealwaysbeenmypower.andIhopeIwilbeabletorepaytheminthefuture.

6.你的大学(aboutuniversity)

HebeiUniversityofEngineeringisbuiltbycentralandlocalgovernments,onalocal-basedcollegesanduniversitiesofHebeiProvince.Theschoolhasabachelor's,masterlevelpersonneltrainingsystem.Atpresentthereare13collegesandtwoteachingdepartments.