求大神帮忙改雅思小作文啊,剑8Task
Thelinegraphbelowdemonstratehowmanygoodstransported
byfourdifferenttypesofwaysintheUKbetween1974and2002.
In1974,roadtransportationwasthemostpopularwayto
delivergoods,onaverage70milliontonnes,followedbywaterandrail,with
about40milliontonnesequal,andapproximately5milliontonnestransported
bypipeline.
Accordingtothegraph,therewasaincreasedtrendof
quantitiesofgoodstransportedbywater,from40milliontonnestoabout60
milliontonnes,between1978to2002,whilethegoodstransportedbyrail
decreasedby15milliontonnes,tothelowestpoint,from40milliontonnesto
25tonnes,eventually,backtotheoriginalquantities.Although,therewasa
fluctuationofgoodstransportedwerebothclimbedby20milliontonnes,from
1974to2002.
Overall,theinformationgivenbythelinegraphisabout
theincreasedtendencyofallthemodesoftransportfordeliveringgoods.
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