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【求大神帮忙改雅思小作文啊,剑8TaskThelinegraphbelowdemonstratehowmanygoodstransportedbyfourdifferenttypesofwaysintheUKbetween1974and2002.In1974,roadtransportationwasthemostpopularwaytodelivergoods,onaverage7】
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求大神帮忙改雅思小作文啊,剑8Task

Thelinegraphbelowdemonstratehowmanygoodstransported

byfourdifferenttypesofwaysintheUKbetween1974and2002.

In1974,roadtransportationwasthemostpopularwayto

delivergoods,onaverage70milliontonnes,followedbywaterandrail,with

about40milliontonnesequal,andapproximately5milliontonnestransported

bypipeline.

Accordingtothegraph,therewasaincreasedtrendof

quantitiesofgoodstransportedbywater,from40milliontonnestoabout60

milliontonnes,between1978to2002,whilethegoodstransportedbyrail

decreasedby15milliontonnes,tothelowestpoint,from40milliontonnesto

25tonnes,eventually,backtotheoriginalquantities.Although,therewasa

fluctuationofgoodstransportedwerebothclimbedby20milliontonnes,from

1974to2002.

Overall,theinformationgivenbythelinegraphisabout

theincreasedtendencyofallthemodesoftransportfordeliveringgoods.

这篇文章能上几分啊?

杜广春回答:
  Thelinegraphbelowdemonstrate(s)(thenumberofgoods)transportedbyfourdifferenttypesofwaysintheUKbetween1974and2002.第一段少了s然后不能说howmany.这样中国英语followedbywaterand...
陶绪泉回答:
  请问您是?
杜广春回答:
  我是?
陶绪泉回答:
  请问老师的评分标准是什么?
杜广春回答:
  根据雅思给出的评分标准   雅思小作文评分标准   Arguments(论证)   充分并且有力的。需要运用多种论证手法   Ideas(内容)   不要出现跑题的情况。有些学生由于词汇量有限,导致题目中的单词不认识;有些学生对于所涉及的题材不了解;有些学生没有抓住写作重点,即理解上有偏差。   Evidence(论据)   关键要合理,并且能够证明论点,论点要结合题目和实际情况   CommunicativeQuality(交流质量)   大体上与Task1的CoherenceandCohesion相同,也涉及文章中代词,关联词,同义反义词等的运用。   VocabularyandSentenceStructure(词汇与句子的构成)
陶绪泉回答:
  好的,非常感谢!
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