应该有一些语法错误,但自己看不出来.帮帮看一下.还有作文结构上有没有问题呢?
题目是人才流失BRAINDRAIN
Braindrainisadelicatewithwhichthiscountryisconfronted.Ontheonehand,moreandmorecollegestudentswhoareexcellentpreferchoosingtostudyabroad.However,afterseveralyears,thesestudentsdon’ttendtocomebacktohomeland.Ontheotherhand,somepeoplepreferspendingsuchmuchmoneytoworkabroadandgetadevelopedcountry’snationality.
Whatarethecausesofbraindrain?Foronething,thereisalittleofrespectforbraininthissociety.Andthehighereducationstudentsgetnofameandfortunewhichtheyshouldget.Foranother,supplyingabetteratmosphereofstudyingatabroad,braincangainmoreacademicachievements.Finally,lackofmoneytoresearchworkinthiscountries,thebrainhavetostudyabroad.Forinstance,thereisalittlemoneyforinstitutesinthiscountries.
Tosumup,firstly,weshouldgivemorerespectforbrain.Secondly,thisgovernmenthadbettertosupplyabetteratmosphereofstudyingforbrain.Consequently,I’mconfindentthatabrightfutureforthedevelopmentofthisbraininthiscountries.