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请专家帮忙修改一下英语作文Today,Iwanttorecommendamoviecalled“Hachi:adog’sstory”.Thestoryisbetweenamannamedparkerandadogcalledhachi.Oneday,parkerfoundadogatthetrainstation.HegaveitanamecalledHachi
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请专家帮忙修改一下英语作文

Today,Iwanttorecommendamoviecalled“Hachi:adog’sstory”.Thestoryisbetweenamannamedparkerandadogcalledhachi.

Oneday,parkerfoundadogatthetrainstation.HegaveitanamecalledHachiandtookithome.

Afterseveralmonths,Hachibecomeamemberofthefamily.Everymorning,HachifollowedParkertothetrainstationandwaitedforhim.

However,afterfewyears,parkerdiedofheartdiseaseandhewouldnevercomeback.ButHachididn’tbelievethis,hethoughthismasterwouldcomebackandplaywithhim.Sohewaitedatthesameplaceeverydayfortenyears.

Atlast,Hachidiedatthetrainstationonasnowynightinhisdream.

Thedog’swaitingmovedmedeeply.Becausehewaitedforamanthatwouldneverappear.Becausetheirrelationshipissopure.

Afterwatchingthismovie,Iknoweveryencounteriscontainsthemysterythatisakindoffate.AndIknowthatLove,istheworld'smosthappiestfaith.SoIkeepaskingmyself,iffateletyouwaitforsomeonefortherestofthelife,foreveryyear,everyseason,everyday.Willyoudothis?Idon’tknow,butIknowHachiwilldo.

Though,thereareonlytwocolorsinHachi’seyes---blackandwhite.Hefeltthetenderestpartoftheworld.Becausehefeltlove,hewaswillingtowait.Becauseoflove,hecouldseethemostbeautifulcolorsintheworld.

Ifyouhaveadog,pleaserememberyouhavealotoffriendstotalkto,butheonlyhaveyoutoplaywith.Pleaserememberdogisonlyonepartofyourlife,butyouarethewholeworldofhim.

Atlast,Ilearnedweshouldneverforgetanyonethatwehaveloved.

That’sall.Thankyou.

茅于海回答:
  作为一个初中生来说,这篇作文还是很不错的~只是后面感想部分有些基本的语法错误,以后要注意点,修改如下:Afterwatchingthismovie,Iknoweveryencounteris(去掉)containsthemysterythat(改成which)is...
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