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请英语达人帮我看下别人帮我更改的作文还有什么问题么本人不太懂什么语法之类的问题,如果能全部帮我整理一遍就更加感谢了!谢谢Thankmyparentsforgivingmylife.They'resodiligentthattheyarekeep
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请英语达人帮我看下别人帮我更改的作文还有什么问题么
本人不太懂什么语法之类的问题,如果能全部帮我整理一遍就更加感谢了!谢谢Thankmyparentsforgivingmylife.They'resodiligentthattheyarekeepingonworkingalldaylonginordertomakealiving.Andthey'resoselflessthattheyalwaysofferallgoodthingsforme.Parentshavemadealltheycandotohelpmegrow.
treatmyparentswiithagratefulandasincereheart.Don'ttakeforgrantedthatparentsshoulddoanythingtohelpus,.Thattheytookustothisbeautifulworldisgreatenough.Ourparentingadults,donotaskourparentsforanythinganylonger,weshouldstopblindlytodemandthemtopay,Thanksforgivingit,thankparentsfortheirbitbybit.
WhenIamhappy,theywouldsharemyhappinesswithme,myparentsarethepeoplewholovemebest,soIhavenoexcusenottolovethem.
Iwilltrymybest,Iwanttoseethesmileintheireyes.Ilovethemforever
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Expressmythankstomyparentsforgivingmelife.They'resodiligent,inordertomakealiving,theykeeponworkingallday.Andthey'resoselflessthattheyalwaysofferallgoodthingsformebutleavingfewthingsfortheyown.Parentshavemadealltheycandotohelpmegrowwell.Thankyou,momanddad.Thanksforyourpay,thanksforeverthingyoudidforme,whateversmalloneorimportantone.
Treatmyparentsgratefullyandsincerely.Don'ttakeparents'payforgranted.Itisparentsthattookustothisbeautifulworld,whichisreallygreatenough.Now,wehavebeengrown-up,weshouldn'taskourparentsforanythingmore.Weshouldstopblindlydemandingthemtopay.
Makethemhappier.WhenIamhappy,theywillbemuchhappierthanme,whileIamsad,theywillletmecalmdownandcheerup.Myparentsarethepeoplewholovemebest,soIhavenoexcusenottolovethem.Iwilltrymybesttomakethemhappy,Iwanttoseethesmileintheireyes.
Mom,dad,Iloveyouforever.
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