1.建议信(ALetterofSuggestion) 　　expressyourwishtobeavolunteer.DearWangQishan, 　　IamaseniorinPekingUniversity.The2008BeijingOlympicGamesiscomingintwoyears.Afterwatchingthe2004AthensOlympicGames,Icannothelpwritingtoyou. 　　Firstofall,hereismysuggestionforthepreparationworkofthe2008BeijingOlympicGames.Theconstructionworkofthesportsbuildingmustbecompletedintimeaccordingtothecontract.InAthens,theswimmingstadiumwasnotaccomplishedintimesothattheeventhadtobeheldintheopenair,whichhasbroughtnegativeeffectontheperformanceofathletes.Inoneword,toprotecttheinternationalimageofChinaandensuretheOlympiccompetition,wemustfinishourpreparationworkwellandintime. 　　Lastbutnotleastimportant,Iwanttoexpressmywishtobeavolunteer.Inthefirstplace,itisthedutyofeveryChinesetodohisbitforthe2008OlympicGames.Inthesecondplace,Ihaveagoodcommandofforeignlanguages.Icanspeak 　　2. 　　AsuggestiontomyEnglishteacher 　　MyEnglishteacheristhemosthard-working(最高级+复合形容词的运用,不错!)teacherIhaveeverseen.（定语从句,可以尝试用同位语哦,比如theelegantlady,myEnglishteacher,isthemost…）Duringherclass,shetellsusalltheknowledgesheknows.Shealsoanswersourquestionsaspossiblyasshecan.(这句前可以用现在分词作状语,Beingpatient,shealso…)Withthehelpofmyteacher,myEnglishimprovesalot. 　　However,sheissostrictwithusthateveryoneisscaredtotalktoher.(so…that…结构用的好!)SoIsuggestthatmyteachershouldbegood-temperedtous.Besides(除了…的表达方法?)topreparethelessons,sheistootired.Agoodrestisnecessary. 　　Ihopeourteachermaytotallychangeafterseeingthesesuggestions,(这里的suggestion要注意不能用复数,前文也只能提及一个建议,多拓展.比如Ifmyteacherisgood-tempered,itisbeneficialnotonlytoherhealth,butalsotoherpopularity) 　　ByWangLin 　　Asuggestiontomyphysicsteacher 　　Physicsismyfavouritesubject.NonethelessIalwaysfallasleepwhenIamhavingphysicslessons.BecauseitissoboringthatIcan’thelpsleeping.Notonlymebutalsomyclassmatesdootherthingsduringtheclass.SoIamgoingtogiveasuggestiontomyphysicsteacher:tomaketheclassmoreinterestinginordertoattractsstudents.Theywilllistentotheteachermorecarefullythanbeforeandmakeprogress.IreallyhopeIcandobetter. 　　Ø内容充实,先说明提出建议的原因,自然地过度到建议.结尾稍显单薄.可再补充些（IsincerelyhopethatmyphysicianteachercantakemyadvicesothatIcandobetterinclass.） 　　ByGaoRuilin 　　Asuggestiontomypoliticsteacher 　　Withthetimepassingbyandthedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,(第一句和文章并无大关系,放在这里略显牵强)politicsismoreandmoreimportanttoday.However,Ialsohaveasuggestiontomypoliticsteacher.(also放在这里合适吗?)WeareGradeNinestudentsandwearereallybusynow.(可用can词组,weareGradeNinestudentssothatwecan’thelpbutbebusywithourlessonsnow.)Shouldwedon’treadnewseveryday?(情态动词不可以和助动词放在一起哦!)IttakesmemuchtimeandIcan’tstudyonothersubjectsbetter.(这两句可以换种说法,informativeasreadingnewsis,ittakesmetoomuchtimeandIamnotabletofocusonothersubjects.)Inaddition,Iknowhowimportantthepoliticsis(感叹句作宾语从句,不错!)andIwillreviewthecurrent(可以说recent)events.AndIhopeteacherwillacceptmysuggestion. 　　BySunBowen 　　Iwant(to)givemyEnglishteacherasuggesti