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Theadvantageofstudyingabroad

Ourhumantechnologyisconnectingtheworld,andmakeitsmallerandsmaller.peopleinchinacanhavethemeetingwiththeirpartnerintheUSAbytheinternet.itissaidthattheworldwillbeasmallvillageinthefuture.now,therearemoreandmorestudentschoosingtheirwaytostudyabroad,meanwhileitiscommonlybelievedthatthereisalotofadvantageofstudyingabroad.

First,youngstudentsgoabroadtostudycanopentheireyes.because,youngstudentsaremoreliketoabsorbthenewconceptandnewidea,andthosearealittledifferentfromourcountry's.soitisagreatchanceforthemtolearnthecultureofothercountry,whichcanopentheireyes.

Second,tostudyabroadcanhelptwocountry'scommunication.communicationisaveryimportantwayforourhumantosolvetheconflictbetweenus,andtopromotethefriendshipbetweenus.learningEnglishcanhelpustocommunicatewithenglish-speakingcountry,similarly,learningothercountry'sculturecanhelpustocommunicatewiththeirpeople,furthermore,thecommunicationbetweentwocountryscanbeachievedonlybythepeopleofbothcountry.

Third,wecanlearntheadvantageofothercountry.insomefields,ourcountry'stechnologyisnotthebest,thatisthereasonwhyweshouldlearnfromother,thestudentscangotothosecountryandlearnthishi-techwhichisourcountrylackof,aftertheirfinishingstudy,theycanreturnandserveourcountry.

PS:youngstudentsgoabroadtostudycanopentheireyes这句话是否正确,应该用going还是go